Patrice 11/17

pony tail

yet another sketch....focusing on the hair and practicing her face. In this sketch, she looks a little heavier than the last one. I think this one is a little better. Getting closer.

another sketch

This drawing doesn't look good to me but it served it's purpose. I am basically trying to work out the body proportions and I think I am closing in on what I want. Also I think I am getting a handle on Patrice's basic look. However, this drawing looks a little dumpy/sloppy for some reason. I think part of it is the pen I used tonight. anyway more later.

more patrice sketches

another Patrice. longer nose bridge. smaller eyes....getting better.

Character Sketch....

Another sketch of Patrice...still needs work.

some initial sketches of Partice....still working on her face a little.

more lettering p 16

I wanted to add the words to this page since it mostly exists for the conversation. stil lnot sure if the flow of the balloons works. I thinned the balloon border by 1 pixel to see if looks better thinner on this page also.

pp14-15 lettered

lettered pp12-13

Some lettered pages...pp10-11

Up at the flickr site I posted six lettered pages but they are hard to read. Here they are...

tit-a-tete

exposed a boobie...practiced some lettering

progress on page 6

more work last night and tonight. The page is coming together pretty good.

Page 6-7 combo

started working on combining pages 6-7 last night. Here's what I got so far.

PAge 16 - cars

page 16 cont'd again

saving the cars for last....

page 16 cont'd

adding some lines to the page....

p16 layouts

...all geeked up so I figured I'd get going on p 16. Here are the layouts...

Constructing a comic page

By Steven grant on CBR - Some interesting stuff here.

No Key No Plan

I'm Diggin on "No Key No Plan" by Okkervil river

Rachmaninoff Piano Concerto on the web